http://cabinetcaligari.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] cabinetcaligari.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] capricornbookworm 2017-02-21 06:49 pm (UTC)

YOU WROTE A THING!!!!

And I’m so very, very (fashionably?) late with commenting, and I’m very sorry, both for you as for myself that I didn’t read this fabulous thing earlier!

There’s NEVER enough Draco/ Al in this world, and boy am I happy you’ve joined the ship!

I love how you immediately plunge us into the attraction they’re feeling, and that rough edge I love so much: Al biting through his lip, Draco quite dominant and so determined, yum :D

And omg him wiping the blood away is so HOT! And how they don’t need words at all, I love how you describe what their interaction does to the both of them, and how the UST was heightened until it was completely inevitable Albus would follow him, without even a word. I love how the silver eyes of the title are being repeated in the silver of the clouds drifting in front of the moon, and the last line, ahhh :D

Great job, lovely!! <33

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